In the beginning, there were
talking stalks of candy sweet corn,
fat happy pepper plants
and jeweled ruby tomatoes,
pirouetting up from the rich earth,
each green leaf another taste of Eden.
Each tiny stalk and curly-qd vine
quenched on the sweat of my fathers hands,
each root tenderly curling the base of his spine.
Now, the ground is scarred,
mouths of soil thrown open, gaping wild;
this land is a sandy grimace garnished,
gouged by the murky waters of August
and the chemical cures restless to roam.
My father, gazing on his ghost of Eden past,
closes his heavy lids over melting eyes and
feels the furrows to the bone, the bone.













Devious Comments
I will say that I don't care for lines 2-4 because they sound ... generic. The rest of the words really stand out. Who knows, maybe I'm picky.
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Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Enter my contests!
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Most women look for a knight in shining armor, I'm looking for a werewolf.
The last flicker of daylight calls to me, but yet into the darkness I walk.
.K.
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:looking up a suspect:
"Lloyd P. Nash." :laughs: "Wanna guess what the "P" stands for?"
"Is it pertinent?"
"Not even close."
- from "Due South"
[link] - Rubber ducks.
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"A man destined to hang can never drown." Regina Spektor
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"A man destined to hang can never drown." Regina Spektor
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